Fate or Fortune -Ch8, p6-

Okay, with Yosuke's face. It either needs to curve in more to show that it's only his left side, or you need to fill in the missing right eye as (after closer inspection) the design was drawn with his whole face at an angle. If the latter, then you'll need to fix his nose as well. 

With Souji (Hey, I got it!) He needs to be about Yosuke's height in the top panel as WinkC1ub said. Also, the proportions of his head and body are off in the last panel (I'd recommend Making his body and arms bigger).

Now for the REAL asshole nitpicking territory: Naoto's Yasogami High badge on her collar on the top panel should actually be on the other side (aka not visible), but her year 1 Roman Numeral pin should be there (funny how this is correct in the bottom panel). Finally....you didn't add the checkered pattern designs like usual. (...Don't look at me like that! I said this was the asshole level!)